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He bought flowers for our date, but left them at his girlfriend’s.
For KnightsOfRomance's Love in 12 Words or Less contest. I might enter again if I think of something.
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inknalcohol Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014   Writer
Damn, that's just wrong. 
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GuinevereToGwen Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Writer
Um... thank you? ;P
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inknalcohol Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014   Writer
You're welcome.  :giggle:
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, that twist. It kind of makes me giggle - come on dude, be smarter - but it's also sad. Very good job fitting the twist and everything in there in so few words! :D
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GuinevereToGwen Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! It's definitely a little sad - but hopefully funny, too. ;)
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :) I think it's both, definitely.
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BDancinJones Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The only thing of yours I've had time to read for SO LONG! (Incase you haven't noticed ... ) But WOW. I'm not normally a fan of six word/single sentence stories, but this one is powerful. Perhaps because I can kinda sorta really relate to this because of some time in my life that may or may not be the present... But hey, this isn't about me. This story is great. Fantastic.
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GuinevereToGwen Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
Haha I understand. Sometimes, writing has to be more important than reading others' work. Thank you! It was a line I thought of yesterday and figured I could use it for this contest.
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SkylineProphet Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely fantastic!
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GuinevereToGwen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks! :)
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confidenceAlive Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Bahaha..Ouch.
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GuinevereToGwen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student Writer
He he... ;)
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Vivacia18 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
Whoopsie^^; But hopefully he remembered to bring the chocolates, right?;P
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GuinevereToGwen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student Writer
Ha ha! We can always hope.
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SCFrankles Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, neat twist - this made me burst out laughing :giggle: Excellent.

Good luck in the contest! ^^
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GuinevereToGwen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student Writer
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you.
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